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Why
Contributed by
blossomingcherry5353
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Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 01:00:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Looking back.
……. I can remember what you said to me.
I can feel the world slip away.
…… It’s make believe……
I’m slipping away.
Tears in my eyes.
The world is blurry now.
I fight the shame,
The lies, hurt, I tried,… I TRIED!
Why can’t I die?
…….tell me..
Tell me…..why.
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Re: Why
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by shortcake on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 02:32:46 PM AEST
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| there is times when i feel this way to but you took the words right out of my mouth |
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Re: Why
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 03:31:09 PM AEST
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| I have felt like to, but you have to pull yourself through it and just be happy, live your life and forget about it. Good write. |
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Re: Why
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by JGB on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 02:46:54 AM AEST
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Awesome write!
I can too, looking back. Don't know the story, but the feeling is the same.
lol. |
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