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Enveloping Silence
Contributed by
EmptyWords
on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 11:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The fear of rejection
(humiliation)
brings tidal waves of constant confusion
ripping through my heart
raging through my head
a river running wild
emotions crashing
(like waves)
creating isolation
blinding my vision
(blurry)
effecting my decisions
fabricated smile
surreal likeness
help me
(allow me to let it go)
Your touch is all i need
(what i crave)
my soul
(so pliable)
under your fingertips
lost in your embrace
(regain focus)
useless words
are left unspoken
and i try to retain
(a steady grip)
or what seems to be
(an illusion)
on what you left me with
The whisper in the cold wind
carries silence
chance of change
(changing is timeless)
and my heart silently prays
deep within
(everyday)
that you might hear this (deafening) silence
and somehow
(someday)
realise
(and understand)
the extent
of the endless pounding
(sensation)
locked away
that resembles
(and reveals)
my pain
Copyright ©
EmptyWords
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2003-01-04 23:20:00]
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Re: Enveloping Silence
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by Mystery_Girl on
Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 12:47:21 AM AEST
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| another powerful heartfelt write also......i have not long wrote one on silence...... i must post it one day.........all the best......tanya......:-) |
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Re: Enveloping Silence
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by Fwog on
Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 05:05:18 AM AEST
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Wow! what a powerful write.
I really enjoy your style.
Catch Ya |
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Re: Enveloping Silence
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by Lone_er on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 12:42:28 PM AEST
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Thank you for visiting my site-So I thought I would return the favor and am so glad I did. This poem is powerful and so full of truth and wisdom. Wonderfully written.
Russ-aka- Lone_er |
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Re: Enveloping Silence
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by frozensuicide on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 09:38:07 AM AEST
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this is also beautiful and pretty. i like this one, and i also like this one's name. it has a good ring to the words you write.
hug a moose! |
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