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Track Your Scent
Contributed by
jyssvw22
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Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 12:27:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Your skin unfelt
Your name not known
I sense you have this gift
A contribution to the cause
Cure the hurt
That takes no pause
No intervention
A contractual clause
Causing this built up tension
This enchanting flair for perfection
Where every strand of your hair
Combed in its precise location
The dress you wear flows
In a uniform direction
The smile that glows
Sends this shiver down my bone
And suddenly I find myself
Miles and miles from home
Cracker Jack prize
Is this diamond ring
A beauty such as yourself
It pales to the sparkle of your skin
It fails to express
Take this not in jest
For a gesture like this
Is meant with all seriousness
When I find you
Track a scent so pristine
To capture you
And make you my queen
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jyssvw22
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2005-06-11 00:27:23]
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Re: Track Your Scent
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by xXcrossedXx on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 06:33:08 AM AEST
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Very interesting write. Keep it up
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Re: Track Your Scent
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 10:16:48 AM AEST
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Very nice piece Jyss...It's bursting with love and lust...A very sensuous write, and I enjoyed reading it. There's definitely some melt-worthy lines in here... "The smile that glows sends this shiver down my bone..." hehehe. Sounds a little naughty to me...lol
Scorp ; ) |
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