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Infection
Contributed by
Rikki
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Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 10:40:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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You must be infected by what I'm projecting.
Don't stray your eyes away,
Is there even a question?
That possible failure is what I'm suspecting.
I raped your one emotion and knew it,
Or was it just comments others added to it?
Fate can act up in curious ways.
It can be pushed away faster than it's obtained.
Constantly pondering what is right
Puts serious strain
On the emotional outlook of
Everything in my brain.
No questions would be asked if not needed be.
We could just realize how settling it would be,
If we could just focus on priorities of we.
Copyright ©
Rikki
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2005-06-10 22:40:34]
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Re: Infection
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by deathdrop on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 02:50:17 PM AEST
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i've commited the crime your talking about here, and the feelings of guilt you've expressed, are exacy to mine.
i-don't know-what-to-say
mmm, where you wrote,
"Fate can act up in curious ways.
It can be pushed away faster than it's obtained.
Constantly pondering what is right
Puts serious strain
On the emotional outlook of
Everything in my brain."
... that speaks ALOT to me.
it kind of jumps out of the screen and grabs me.
This-is-powerful!
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Re: Infection
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by ginnginn11 on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 07:55:15 PM AEST
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| i had to read it a couple of times to suck all the information in but i really like. ;) |
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