|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Tomorrow
Contributed by
freckle
on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 09:28:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
|
Tomorrow
Yesterday is no more
Tomorrow is outside my door
Full of dreams within my reach
Full of sunshine and the beach
I live where life can be so grand
Tropical flowers, warm beach of sand
Wildlife and mankind, mixing well
The world's my oyster, I've grabbed the shell
So now I'll go outside and see
Just what tomorrow, has for me!
Carol
Copyright ©
freckle
... [
2005-06-10 21:28:16]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Tomorrow
(User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 10:41:54 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Nice job Carol! Can I move there too?? lol I like the way you went about such a potentially devastating topic(!) It's a unique, upbeat attitude, and I love how you pieced it together.
Scorp. |
|
|
Re: Tomorrow
(User Rating: 1 )
by Arden on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 07:35:16 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I loved this. as others have said, its very refreshing and upbeat.
the rhyme just rocked. and the word usage was great. a well deserved 5/5
-Rebekah |
|
|
Re: Tomorrow
(User Rating: 1 )
by Voice of the Silent on
Sunday, 12th April 2009 @ 06:53:19 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Great poem
but saddly here the only thing tomarrow holds is rain lol
hope to read more soon
-kelly |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
