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dissapear in your dreams
Contributed by
all_the_dead_roses
on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 09:26:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Don't ask me to give up
don't ask me to let go
I 'll do anthing for you
I'll move any mountain
that keeps you from me
I'll change, rearrange
dissapear in your dreams
I'll falter, i'll leave
i'll do anything you ask of me
because I love you that much
That I will
It will kill me but I will
I'll turn your black into grey
It won't hurt when I bleed
I'll give up my desire til you
get what you need
I would take your bullet
and fall to the ground
I'll give up everything
til i'm lost and your found
If you can just look past your fear
you'll see me standing right here
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Re: dissapear in your dreams
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 04:26:18 PM AEST
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Wow this was an awesome poem, I really liked it, I liked all of the emotion that portrayed in this poem, love how you ended, it was the best part. SLipSiX.
Please comment on my work to. :) . |
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Re: dissapear in your dreams
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by fearlessleader7 on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 01:28:03 AM AEST
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Oh, so much emotion! I loved this part:
"It will kill me but I will
I'll turn your black into grey
It won't hurt when I bleed
I'll give up my desire til you
get what you need
I would take your bullet
and fall to the ground
I'll give up everything
til i'm lost and your found"
Great job! |
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