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Vampiric Delight
Contributed by
DarylLew151
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Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 09:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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How is it that I lived without your embrace?
In desperate need of your touch, your taste
So lonely without you, please come near
Don’t want to be without you, come here
Let us dance for a little longer the song has no end
You are more then my eternal lover, you are my friend
So dance with me one last time before it is too late
I'm going to love you so hard I just can't wait
Tonight you have no choice in this
Going to tie you up, and give you a duct tape kiss
Your mumbles and muffled screams titillate me so
I’m going to have to get rid of you so no one will know
When you lay there cold and presumably dead
I bite your neck and feast on the red
The warm nectar of life drips down my cheek
My heaven is in you hell so to speak
I scream at the stars and dance with the moon
Must make it to my coffin its morning soon
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DarylLew151
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2003-01-04 21:40:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Vampiric Delight
(User Rating: 1 ) by dreamweave18 on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 10:01:45 PM AEST (User
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I think it's pretty good. Very creative and descriptive. I saw it all. |
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Re: Vampiric Delight
(User Rating: 1 ) by MalevolentDreamer on
Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 05:28:25 PM AEST (User
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I simply adore this poem. I have one that's similar..yet, so different. Perhaps I'll post it.
Great work. =) |
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Re: Vampiric Delight
(User Rating: 1 ) by OreO on
Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 06:02:33 PM AEST (User
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Wow, i loved this one, i have always had a curiosity about the Vampire world...and i'd love to be the bride lol....but i dont think i want to just be one that is a victim that dies and nothing more...now i have always said my biggest fear in life was "after dying coming back reincarnated" because i dont want to live in this life no more than i have to but if i was a vampire i dunno i think i might lol.....ahhhh this one made me think about what i have always said and made me eat my own words....thank you for sharing this one i enjoyed it alot....you have a beautiful talent my friend....dont ever stop writing...
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