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CRUSHED
Contributed by
judasman
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Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 07:49:58 PM in AEST
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A LONG TIME AGO,
YOU GAVE ME PAIN,
YOU DIDN'T GIVE ME THE LOVE,
THAT I NEEDED.
A LONG TIME AGO,
YOU SHOWERED ME WITH HURT,
YOU DIDN'T SHOWER ME WITH THE LOVE,
THAT I NEEDED.
A LONG TIME AGO,
YOU SHOWED ME HATE,
YOU DIDN'T SHOW ME THE LOVE,
THAT I NEEDED.
Copyright ©
judasman
... [
2005-06-10 19:49:58]
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Re: CRUSHED
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by Rikki on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 10:25:13 PM AEST
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| I'm sorry but, the only way this poem could be good is if the author is 13 years old. |
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Re: CRUSHED
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 7th January 2006 @ 01:05:08 PM AEST
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i disagree with rikki - this is a wonderful poem...it bleeds with emotion, with sadness, maybe even hate.
i like it
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