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Never Ending Sickness
Contributed by
PsychoticDreamz
on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 09:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Sick of the pain
Sick of the tears
Sick of life
and all the wasted years
Sick of the lies
and my trust in you
of all the hell you put me through
Sick of the memories
that will forever stay
Sick of not being able to get away
Sick of the nights
you shout out your lungs
Sick of the fights
from since I was young
Sick of this Family
Sick of this place
Sick of your soul
Sick of your face
Sick of your anger
and of the abuse
Get the idea?
I'm SICK of you..
Copyright ©
PsychoticDreamz
... [
2003-01-04 21:20:00]
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Re: Never Ending Sickness
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by sheigha on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 11:31:55 PM AEST
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| This was very good...i can definately relate right now, thanx for sharing |
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Re: Never Ending Sickness
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by roisin on
Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 01:17:39 AM AEST
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| i can hear your anger! thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Never Ending Sickness
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 01:34:25 AM AEST
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I like the repetition in this. I also like the anger, but not from one so young. This is a good poem and I am glad you vented your anger through this method instead of other ones.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Never Ending Sickness
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 05:02:46 PM AEST
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| good write your anger shows through. This is a good way to vent ..I hope it helped you |
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Re: Never Ending Sickness
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by mystical_illusion on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 04:54:13 PM AEST
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Very good. I loved reading it. Can totaly relate, story of my life lol. Thank you for writting.
-kelly |
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Re: Never Ending Sickness
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by Sandie on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 12:31:39 AM AEST
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| I can feel your pain in this poem. I too use writing to rid myself of anger and pain. I hope that you were able to change to situation you were in. Or a some point had another person to talk with. Please continue to write and read others peoms to show that you are NOT ALONE. |
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Re: Never Ending Sickness
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by Grae on
Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 01:58:43 AM AEST
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| I totally feel this poem inside and out. |
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