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Lost
Contributed by
kill_my_soul
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Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 06:27:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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For all my people young and who stand tall.
All the ones who don’t care at all
Who live life to the fullest
And don’t think smoking weed is foolish.
For all my people who get called stoners
When maybe we are just loners
In the game of life you play the fool,
And life to us is one big rule.
For all my people who get confused
All because we just get used.
Maybe doing drugs isn’t so good
What can you do when you grow up in the hood?
For all my people who are so lost
That in the end we have to pay the cost
Dime bags don’t cost a dime anymore,
When you smoke the stuff you hit the floor,
When you do it for so long you tend to get bored
For all my people who can see though these issues,
You see so many parents crying with tissues,
All that are crying know the truth about weed
What they know can help us succeed.
Let us open up to those who smoke weed
Let all the parents help their children succeed.
For all my people young and who stand tall
For all my people who don’t care at all
For all my people who live life to the fullest
And to all my people who think smoking weed is
Foolish.
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2005-06-10 18:27:00]
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Re: Lost
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by sicknivesevered on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 10:50:13 PM AEST
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| Yea, its alright. I'm not a stoner so the whole moral lesson doesn't reach out to me. It still has a good rhythm and rhymes, though. What is AVID, anyway? Acronyms are mysterious things. (^_^)v |
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Re: Lost
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 04:22:26 PM AEST
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| Lol, whoo, yahoo, marajuana. I mean yes, I really liked this poem, we are like part of the group of all of the words that are portrayed in this poem, it was very good. SLipSiX. |
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