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old m8
Contributed by
mindset
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Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 03:54:22 PM in AEST
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Old friend things have changed
All this is a time a lost frame
Now to be a climb of high
Of past nothin but the sigh
Onward now a time of change
Things now a different explain
One way trip no place to slip
A happy while the means a true smile
We is the true blue the only while
We is the past we shall remind
INside only a true exile
Yet things of change we are the same
Only now we will always remain
Tonight my friend we shall lift the glass
And be the other a shadow of our past
Im with you my old friend all the way
You know need to be the pure true
And show us your nothin but the blue
Respect...
for You...
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mindset
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2005-06-10 15:54:22]
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Re: old m8
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by Rikki on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 10:30:03 PM AEST
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I think better grammer would be, "We are..."
We being plural. |
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Re: old m8
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by mindset on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 03:03:39 PM AEST
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ricki if u dont understand it dont comment
lets have a look at ur ***** |
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