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I Have Perished
Contributed by
PainfulSpirit06
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Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 12:43:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Like the leaves on a tree in the autumn of the year
I have perished
Like a freshwater fish thrown into a sea of salt
I have perished
Like the life of a junkie, only itchin' for that next odyssey
I have perished
Like the soul of the weary, meeting the cousin of death
I have perished
Like the immune system of a full blown AIDS patient
I have perished
Like the committment when deceit has found its way
I have perished
I have perished from the hell sent to me through the days
And I have perished because you cheated in 3 different ways
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2005-06-10 12:43:02]
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Re: I Have Perished
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by MorningGlory on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 12:49:17 PM AEST
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Wow...I am amazed at your talent.
You have a way of describing certain things that make a person feel so much.
I felt every word. |
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Re: I Have Perished
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 05:33:25 PM AEST
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i like how you kept building it up...to the end. i like the end. and i have perished because...that's just really cool
love the poem
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