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No Hope Left
Contributed by
heartbroken4ever
on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 12:02:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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As I sit here in my room
I know that I am soon to be doomed
I live here in a world that hates me
all because of who I chose to be
Why do poeple always have to judge you
for every little thing you do
At nite all I do is cry
and hope that soon i will die
Where as all the love gone today
it seems like it has faded away
No one even cares
or tries to be there
All they can do now
is sit a find a way to judge you some how
Will this ever end
or did it just begin
I tried of it all
it's causing everything around me to crumble and fall
I guess the only way it'll stop is for me to die
but my only wish is for no one to cry
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heartbroken4ever
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2005-06-10 12:02:00]
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Re: No Hope Left
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by PainfulSpirit06 on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 12:54:37 PM AEST
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| Did you write that poem for me? I think you did because I am sick of being judged too. No one really knows me, but because of the things they hear, they think they know me. Keep your head up and continue to write. |
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Re: No Hope Left
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by ForeverAlone on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 02:11:37 PM AEST
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*Pokes at her lightly- Uh ah..nope wont allow it Amber, Love you my angel
~Clark |
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Re: No Hope Left
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by boobiepeach on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 09:34:20 PM AEST
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| relatable, but no it never ends. you just gotta find an inbetween, a quite. |
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Re: No Hope Left
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by Dorkfish on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 03:29:15 PM AEST
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| That was areally great one. Very easy to relate to it, I agree. |
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