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Unhealthy

Contributed by dorkfish on Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 11:34:52 AM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

Blinded by lies
Hiding from truth
Chasing unrealistic dreams
Feeling safe in insanity
Why is reality so invisible?
Why is it so hard to realize?
It is an endless cycle of craziness and despair
It is loved, it is needed, it is orgasmic
The feeling of hatred turned to want
Never actually loving, just loving to fight
It is a need for chase
It is an unknowing need for love
Love that cannot be achieved
Pretending it is not there
Pretending all is well
It has overcome any sense of real affection
It has turned to sour appreciation
It has become a hatred
It has become love
It has become a love of hatred
How can it be? How is it so hard to see?
It is a lifetime of salty tears and contaminated thoughts
A false sense of reality
A false sense of truth
A false being
It cannot be helped, only watched
Only forgotten

Copyright © dorkfish ... [ 2005-06-10 11:34:52]
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Re: Unhealthy (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 11:51:19 AM AEST
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Nicely worded, and it does sound like an unhealthy relationship...I like; "It has become a hatred, it has become a love, it has become a love of hatred..." Well said...Great wordplay.
Scorp.

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