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What it feels like to get burned

Contributed by c2b6s on Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 11:34:29 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

I've poured my heart out onto paper
I'll pour it again onto this screen
But nothing i say will change the fact
That I believed everything you didn't mean

I was really just a drunken mistake
I doubt the same mistakes are made three times
I know you couldn't have lied to me
When you said you couldn't get me off your mind

But you did, and you're the reason i can't sleep
Am I still there when you go to bed at night
I had a conversation with your bestfriend
He said you didn't know that what you're doing isn't right.

He told me you didn't mean to be a player
That I was into it and you weren't
Does that mean I should forgive you
I wish you knew what it felt like to get burned

This wound is still so open
I pretend that i'm perfectly fine
But you don't understand how it feels
To know you never even wanted to be mine

Have you ever been used before?
I hope someday you meet your match
I hate to say it but I loved you
Now not only have I lost my best friend
but I lost my other half

Copyright © c2b6s ... [ 2005-06-10 11:34:29]
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Re: What it feels like to get burned (User Rating: 1 )
by AmyLee4Ever on Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 10:40:15 PM AEST
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Awesome write!

I've poured my heart out onto paper
I'll pour it again onto this screen
But nothing i say will change the fact
That I believed everything you didn't mean

This grabbed my attention instantly... because it is true. No matter what you do... nothing seems to ever change... does it?

Another thing that was very strong to my eyes was this...

He told me you didn't mean to be a player
That I was into it and you weren't
Does that mean I should forgive you

You do a great job at comparing why things are so hard to do. It is often hard to forgive a person becuase you have been hurt so bad, but then there is a part that makes you still want to believe and still want to act like everything is fine. It is like a good vs evil thing.

Once again... great write...

Jodi

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