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Everything I Feel
Contributed by
wizard
on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 10:59:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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This for you, a tale so true,
On everything I feel
Your smiling face and sugar taste,
Such beauty, such appeal
The day we met, I shan't forget,
Opening to you
And before we kissed, I did not exist
Now my love anew
For your gentle touch, I long so much
and your passionate embrace
Your glowing smile, your flowing style
and my lips against your face
With you by my side, I feel inside,
this feeling so unreal,
My heart...complete, my dear so sweet,
this feeling so surreal
Copyright ©
wizard
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2005-06-10 10:59:51] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Everything I Feel
(User Rating: 1 ) by gwenevere on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 01:02:52 PM AEST (User
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AHHHHH!!!!! Lovely.So good to read a happy poem.Well Done |
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Re: Everything I Feel
(User Rating: 1 ) by MorningDove on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 01:28:17 PM AEST (User
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Fantastic, Wiz. Hope this is for real and you are walking on air.
smiles,
Rita |
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Re: Everything I Feel
(User Rating: 1 ) by Man_On_High on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 09:11:12 PM AEST (User
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it seems that each and every stanza was a poem within itself..
splendid simplicity...
a majestic write..5 stars on this one bro..
Billy
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Re: Everything I Feel
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 11:20:24 PM AEST (User
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very nice, very nice indeed. one of the few happy poems i have read and will ever read, and if they are all like these, i might have to read a few more =] |
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Re: Everything I Feel
(User Rating: 1 ) by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 01:21:29 PM AEST (User
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*smile* Nice job Wiz...Well done, I like this...
Scorp. |
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Re: Everything I Feel
(User Rating: 1 ) by Dorkfish on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 12:48:28 PM AEST (User
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That was so sweet and romantic. You have an amaing talent for capturing what love feels like. Great emotions and great write! |
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Re: Everything I Feel
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 09:37:13 PM AEST (User
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"before we kissed, I did not exist"
That has got to be one of the most striking lines I've read.
EVER!
That, in itself, is staggering. And when wholly encompassed
by the remainder . . . how delicately tender.
Beautiful. Every word !!
~Breezy
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