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My Helen...
Contributed by
In_a_While
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Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 08:35:53 AM in AEST
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My Helen. a friend, an angel
this knife that you place in my life
is cold but i'm warm.. for now
My Helen. a girl, the beauty
this poison i taste in your voice
is slow to kill...but i like to hear it
My Helen. a raven, dark wings
have you brought me sorrow to feed on?
it's bad but i'll eat it all, later
My Helen. a lake, the surface
i swim towards breath but i can feel death
it's okay, i'm back in my womb
My Helen. a dark love, you own me
won't you bring tears to my eyes
so i can feel someday again..
My Helen.....
dw
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Re: My Helen...
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 08:47:20 AM AEST
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Wow---nicely done...! Oozes of sweet love to me...lol Ahh yes; the pains of love...Isn't it grand?!? Good job.
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Re: My Helen...
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by sride686 on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 06:17:20 AM AEST
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| Wow DW this a good and emotional write. Love is great but it does bring a lot of pain with the love whether they stay or go it can be hard both ways. Take care I’ve been gone for a few days but its good to be back on and read your work. You work like always is good and has your own great style that I enjoy. Bye for now….Steve |
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Re: My Helen...
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by Catalina on
Sunday, 21st September 2008 @ 10:18:49 AM AEST
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Oh how we come back for more knowing well of what we are getting into. For love i would sacrifice it all, for love that is true...
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