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Key without courage
Contributed by
mel_666
on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 05:51:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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your face
your eyes
the heavens
the skies
the hate
the love
the stars are falling
from up above
we look
we walk
but never we talk
i show my love
you show it too
but when all boils down
you never love me as much as i love you
this silent love
will always be
your hearts my casket
and i hold the key
but my hand always fumbles
when it nears that lock
like a door you never open
even when i knock
so i will stay away
stay out of your heart
and you will think everything is fine
while my heart breaks apart
Copyright ©
mel_666
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2005-06-10 05:51:00]
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Re: Key without courage
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by marshmalloska on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 06:25:47 AM AEST
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Wow.....................................
You said it perfectly |
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Re: Key without courage
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 06:43:24 AM AEST
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Sad but nicely done..
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Re: Key without courage
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by spazz911 on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 08:29:00 AM AEST
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awsome poem, i loved how it flowed, it was truely beautiful i thought...well write more like this
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