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hold me tight
Contributed by
socialmisfit
on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 04:09:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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curl up and lay close
the only comfort i have
is the pillow i hug in my arms
hidden behind the smiles
is a loneliness i keep
i am nothing more than a child
wishing to hear a soothing heartbeat
lulling gently, sleep to come soon
every tear falling
every one a broken wish of you
weighted sorrow
every shaking sigh
longing to hold you
but this pillow will have to do
along with thought's of you
I dream,
just to hold your hand, and
I am lost to imagination.
A sort of starry-eyed
fascination.
wishing, hoping, dreaming
if only this pillow was you...
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socialmisfit
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2005-06-10 04:09:39]
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Re: hold me tight
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 08:57:18 AM AEST
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I too have been hugging and wishing my pillow was someone as of late as well!! lol Nice job, I can really relate.
Scorp. |
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Re: hold me tight
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by pollypocket on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 02:20:46 PM AEST
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| You're not alone. My guy doesn't even know, and it KILLS to stare him in the eys with him not knowing how I feel about him. That pillow has become too much of a comfort to me as well. It just sucks that pillows can't hug back. |
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Re: hold me tight
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by Arden on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 06:17:22 PM AEST
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i like how you used the concept of a pillow in this write. the feelings that i get from it just seem so empty and almost hopeless.
i really liked this. keep it up :)
-Rebekah |
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Re: hold me tight
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 09:32:31 AM AEST
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I can relate. This poem was really good. Never give up on love. Let love give up on you or let it find you at least. Things will happen they always do. This poem was sad and it was brillant.
take care
christina |
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