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He loves me, he loves me not
Contributed by
brokenbutterfly
on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 04:08:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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He loves me, he loves me not
The petals fall like broken dreams
Landing softly on this cold, hard ground
Memories drift away on butterfly wings
Fragile and beautiful, they float, always
Just out of reach, just beyond reality
These petals fall, these tears alongside
He loves me, he loves me not
Words that echo through the decades
Repeated over and over, pure lies
Broken beauty blooms, they litter this heart
Souvenirs of a shattered soul
Cracked and splintered by your fiction
Fate dangles, poised to fly yet sure to fall
Your twisted lover's words haunt
As the stained white shards sink
Into my temporary eternity
He loves me
He loves me not
He loves me
One last petal falls forever
He loves me not
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2005-06-10 04:08:49]
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Re: He loves me, he loves me not
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 09:01:48 AM AEST
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*claps* Very nice job here! Some excellent lines in this write...This one really caught my eye...; "Fate dangles, poised to fly yet sure to fall..." Great poem.
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Re: He loves me, he loves me not
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 10:17:15 AM AEST
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| Wow, a beautifull well written poem, it sent chills into my heart. Good write. |
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Re: He loves me, he loves me not
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by New_York_Chick on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 09:55:32 AM AEST
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I like your style of writting a lot!
this poem is very relatable |
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