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You Say
Contributed by
Sad-one
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Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 12:18:10 AM in AEST
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you say that its ok
and i should just forget about it
but i came with my virginity
and then i left without it
you tell me to move on
and say the past is behind me
but the memories in my head
just wont let themselves go free
i want to end this poem
i just dont know how
ill be writing a 300 page novel
if i dont end this poem right now.
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Sad-one
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2005-06-10 00:18:10]
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Re: You Say
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by crystalfire on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 12:59:39 AM AEST
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| Hmm...this poem seems like a potential song, and I think that a lot of women today can sympathize with this poem...I like it! |
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Re: You Say
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by SidneyCid on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 06:18:27 PM AEST
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To lose your virtue is a start
to happiness no end,
So don't despair and pull your hair,
Your wretchedness will mend.
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