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'Til the morning of tomorrow
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 06:40:00 PM in AEST
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High on the mountain,
where the sun comes from the east
is where you'll find me
leavin' this worrisome world and
trouble behind me,
baby if you ever want me, right here
brush your lips against my
cheeks yet another day,
high above the cliffs and the sea,
this ones not too hard to climb
love the mountain life, you and me
why up here in seclusion?
Rather hear nothingness,
beauty and nature's contribution,
winds blow freedoms high.
Now can make it through the days,
sweet love was hard to do without
yeah need the heights to keep me
from loosing my mind.
Sometimes I wish I were a vulture
flying high alone, cotton candy
clouds floating at my side
shattered hopes and broken screams
all I have to show for my life, it seems,
'tis a better way of living dreams
rising like a bird above the sea.
Copyright ©
ladyfawn
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2003-01-04 18:40:00]
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Re: 'Til the morning of tomorrow
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by spooky on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 06:46:04 PM AEST
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beautifully written,,,maybe they wii find you ,,and fly away with you ,,just to see what you see in life,,well done ,,keepm comin
spooky |
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Re: 'Til the morning of tomorrow
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 11:10:19 PM AEST
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Wow. Ness..this is absolutely beautiful.....
I love it so much..
Jenni |
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Re: 'Til the morning of tomorrow
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by roisin on
Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 01:28:06 AM AEST
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| a beautiful vision flying high above the cliffs and sea.....you took me there through your words...ta |
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Re: 'Til the morning of tomorrow
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 06:26:31 PM AEST
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Your lovely write here conjures up beautiful, tinged with a little sadness, images in my mind Nessa.
Oh to have the gift of flight!!
With love
Dean;-) |
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Re: 'Til the morning of tomorrow
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by EmptyWords on
Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 12:03:02 AM AEST
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| mmmm,Nice... very nice Nessa |
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Re: 'Til the morning of tomorrow
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by thorns on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 02:08:43 AM AEST
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| dreamlike. |
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Re: 'Til the morning of tomorrow
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by wolfflow on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 03:05:58 PM AEST
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| any woman compares herself to a vulture i have to be wary of, i mean a bloke would have to resemble decomposing carrion before she found him attractive, hey maybe i am in with a chance here, but no i'm not dead yet, only brain dead, at least thats my excuse, whats yours, loves ya |
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Re: 'Til the morning of tomorrow
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 02:45:25 AM AEST
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| Roflmao! |
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Re: 'Til the morning of tomorrow
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by Cynthia on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 10:14:20 AM AEST
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| Beautifully written my friend. Your words touch me. *S* Cynthia |
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