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Letting Go
Contributed by
curtisc
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Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 10:52:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
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It is so hard to just let go,
I don't know if it can be done.
There's just so much held below,
will I ever again see the sun?
The last glimmer of hope I hold,
fades more and more each day.
How will all of this unfold?
Why can't it all just go away?
I've been down this same road before,
but this time it's worse.
I can't take this anymore,
why can't life just have reverse?
This pain I feel just burns inside,
not a second goes by that it isn't there.
Without her a part of me has died,
the saying holds true, life just isn't fair.
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Re: Letting Go
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by cutes252 on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 12:44:51 AM AEST
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thats the way i feel about a guy i lost
very good
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Re: Letting Go
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by emystar on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 01:15:45 AM AEST
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Very sad but well said.
Never give up as u r much stronger than u think.
I'm familar with the feelings u have but someday u will feel better about things.
huggs, luv, prayer,
emy |
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Re: Letting Go
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by MomentInTime on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 02:32:43 AM AEST
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Your trying has paid off lol. This is a well put together write. Watch the beats.
I enjoyed this line:
why can't life just have reverse?
A chuckle amid the sadness is good medicine.
Cheers
Jordan :o)
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Re: Letting Go
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 08:55:57 PM AEST
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A sad write my friend, love is the cruelest
curse deguised as a gift, and yet needs it's
own forgivness like 4 love it's self is riddled
with flaws . . . great write curt . . .
Ben : )
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Re: Letting Go
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by O7NeVeS on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 01:27:34 AM AEST
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| Ur right...life isn't fair, and a lot of the time, at least in my experiences...Luv Sux!! But this is just a road bump in ur life...things always have a way of working out. Well at least I hope so. Tanya |
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