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Death, Come Get Me
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 10:37:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Come dear Reaper, I look forward to the day we meet
For I am a worshipper of you watch me grovel at your feet
Your presence in my heart causes no reason to fear
For my time is ending and I need to feel you near
I arise in the night and hope you are soon meant to take me
Steal my soul forever so no one can again wake me
Oh do hurry
Please why aren’t you already here?
Don’t leave me to waste in this sea of disgusting pain
Count me as a perished one for my heart does already lie lame
The hour is approaching
Reaper do not be late
Unclean mind wishes for you now
In bravery I wait
I want this living to be done so do promise me ending’s rescue
From life’s meaningless search, the only purpose I pursue
I do not quake with worry; no I am not at all scared
Hear me call thy feared name, for of dying I am prepared
Death, come get me
Of you
I am not afraid…
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Re: Death, Come Get Me
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by Jimmato on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 10:46:31 PM AEST
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| To me this reads as a little brash and defiant, a kind of challenge . 'Sea of disgusting pain' is well written. |
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Re: Death, Come Get Me
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 10:56:26 PM AEST
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| I like this alot .Its very dark and i can feel the challange .awsome write. |
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Re: Death, Come Get Me
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by Skinney86 on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 11:16:44 PM AEST
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| I like this a lot, very descriptive and also deep! |
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Re: Death, Come Get Me
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by mel_666 on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 06:14:24 AM AEST
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this poem is awesum and very deep.
it hit home hard for me
great write!!
thanx mel |
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Re: Death, Come Get Me
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by sprinter27 on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 09:37:25 PM AEST
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great poem!! i liked a lot and i'm waiting for Death, too. but we all are and i know you are having problems and difficulties, but i really hope that Death doesn't come to get you soon, i'm sorry but i can see what you can do ^ and it's nice to have someone who agrees with me. wishing you the best of luck!!!
~sprints
p.s. good write |
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