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sharp as knives
Contributed by
boobiepeach
on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 10:28:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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sharp as knives
words of ignorance think right
stabing motion
of truth to you
but knowledge lives in darkned night
always right never latter
do you see my cryes in slumber
think of nothing but your words
but listen closely to my fears
feed opinion only
never apease
never heard his words of truth
so judge not my words of callow
i am here and you are not
so take your knife and pull it out
think what will
for thoughts are yours
but you never tasted thoughts or tears
cuts are slow but some are deep
keep words in belong
in there block
dullest of words are sharp as knives
delacate skin on blades of lies
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boobiepeach
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2005-06-09 22:28:58]
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Re: sharp as knives
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by Dorkfish on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 11:01:19 AM AEST
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| Wow the person you wrote that about sounds like a horrible person. You really sound deeply hurt by that person, I bet they feel badly after reading that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: sharp as knives
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 04:05:30 PM AEST
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I definitely like the concept of this write...Lots of pain in this...I wouldn't say so much anger, as sorrow, regret...very strong. My only complaint would be the typos!!! I hate to say, but it's a pet peeve of mine. Just give it a quick once over before you post, or click 'yes' for the mods to proof read for you...
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Re: sharp as knives
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by Sinned on
Friday, 27th January 2006 @ 11:24:05 PM AEST
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Yeah the toung is a double edged sword and can cut and hurt deeply. good poem
Sinned
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