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reailty loss
Contributed by
boobiepeach
on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 10:18:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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sun was down so was she
not sad not worried but down
not knowing she was down
she was packed with ignorance
fingers scratched and figetted
eyes staired and wondered
what is real
what can you touch
inhale exhale
you have seen too much
sit and talk with words of many
meanings of few
reality escaped through
glass and fire
pinching the flame
out to breathe
what is real
what can you touch
exhale inhale
been through to much
ambition not
her shoes are broken
wish not to see
not to hear
no dream or wish
apply no fear
what can you see
what can you touch
inhale exhale
can not feel much
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2005-06-09 22:18:34]
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Re: reailty loss
(User Rating: 1 )
by Alina on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 01:27:32 PM AEST
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WOW. You've left me speechless. Wonderful and thought provoking write. I LOVED IT! KEEP IT UP THE WRITES!
ALINA |
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Re: reailty loss
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by Elayner27 on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 11:08:01 PM AEST
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| That is an awesome write. I loved the repitition and final stanza. Wow. And if you think about it there's so many ways this fits in with life. Expecially mine. |
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