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Ghostly Presence
Contributed by
spazz911
on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 08:11:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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ghosts are here...
I hear them callling
a ghostly haunting song
their transparent figures
gliding like ice
float through my life
and hold my breath tight
no appearence is seen
but there shadows come closer
I see them, its really them
they are here and they know
don't you feel their presence?
or am I the only one in tune?
does it really matter
who and where they are
they are all flowing
toward the earth and rain that calls
in a snowy sleet
they will avail
and send there death
upon rusty nail
dusting the earth
with their cold chilly presence
leaving it here
so we can have that chance
Copyright ©
spazz911
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2005-06-09 20:11:36]
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Re: Ghostly Presence
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 08:47:47 PM AEST
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| Wow this was a good poem, it was kind of chilling with the words that you used. Good write. |
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Re: Ghostly Presence
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by blue_angel on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 12:44:59 PM AEST
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good poem.. well written... u keep changing your attitude in yer poems i cant tell if yer happy or sad... a lil help here...
jennie* |
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Re: Ghostly Presence
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st January 2006 @ 06:09:47 PM AEST
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| good job i want to read more of wut u have written. |
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Re: Ghostly Presence
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by Teusday-Moon on
Friday, 15th December 2006 @ 04:19:04 PM AEST
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| I think this is a great poem. I sent shivers down my spine. I love it! |
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