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I Am Not In Love With You
Contributed by
Debz
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Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 04:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
InternetLove
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I feel so alone when you're not here
an empty space I feel inside
your warmth and tenderness draws me near
when I thought I lost you, a part of me died
but I am not in love with you
I watch my phone all day long
awaiting a call or message from you
It seems I am not that strong....
"oh, God, anything will do!"
but I am not in love with you
A day without you is so empty
a week is just too much to bear
my life would be so lonely
without you here to care
but I am not in love with you
I dream of you every night
of looking into your eyes tenderly
damn.....somehow it feels so right
to have you near me, holding me
but I am not in love with you, right?
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Debz
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2003-01-04 16:40:00]
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Re: I Am Not In Love With You
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by lilch4ever on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 05:01:10 PM AEST
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| Very good but you don't seem like your not in love. Nicely written though. |
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Re: I Am Not In Love With You
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 05:34:54 PM AEST
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Lovely poem...
Jenni |
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Re: I Am Not In Love With You
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by OreO on
Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 05:45:12 PM AEST
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This is so beautifully written Deb, i enjoyed reading this one alot...it is so full of emotions and it's so sad as well, thanks for sharing this one...
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Re: I Am Not In Love With You
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by SpreadYourWings on
Friday, 26th December 2003 @ 05:31:15 AM AEST
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| I really liked this poem. I think we've all been there when confused about our emotions. |
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Re: I Am Not In Love With You
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 11:00:31 AM AEST
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Hi there Debz,
I know the feeling. What is a pub, except an internet chatroom with beer? lol.
This is an excellent poem. I recently put one on along the same lines called charlotte.com ubt you have captured it perfectly.
*Cyber hugz lol
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