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waiting...
Contributed by
Vermillion
on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 07:58:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Waiting...
i see you live day by day
as we drift farther away
i stretch out my hand but i cant touch
wanting something i cant have so much
i gaze upon your lovely face
i wonder when ill be with you
you make me love and forget all the hate
when the night is black and the sky is blue
caught in between life and death
my love for you is all thats left
trapped within all echoes
invisible within the shadows
we were separated so soon
i see you step upon the stool
wrap the rope around your neck
and prepare yourself for death
you did it cause you missed me
now together forever we shall be
forever wrapped in the moon light were chasing
darling when you die ill be right here waiting....
Copyright ©
Vermillion
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2005-06-09 19:58:33]
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Re: waiting...
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 08:50:22 PM AEST
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| This was a very emotional poem, I liked it alot. |
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Re: waiting...
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by shelby on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 09:18:39 PM AEST
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I love getting chills and reading your poetry dark and deep with emotion more more more!
Michelle |
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Re: waiting...
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by juliette on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 09:54:08 PM AEST
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This is great! I loved it - very dramatic and dark......different in a good way!
thanks for sharing!
*juliette |
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Re: waiting...
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by assassinatorgirl on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 09:52:42 PM AEST
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| aw, im sorry, i know losing your love is the hardest thing... i wish you luck, if it was about you that is. all your poems are so good. |
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