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She
Contributed by
dorkfish
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Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 04:25:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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She acted as a mother, but was never respected.
She was a counselor, but was never trained.
She was a supporter, but was never credited.
She was a giver, but was never thanked.
She stood by, but was never rewarded.
She loved unselfishly, but was never repayed.
She cared comletely, but was never appreciated.
She give him all, but was badly scorned.
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Re: She
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by xxbreathlessx on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 04:36:55 PM AEST
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| i love the way you wrote this. the repeating acts a great effect and i loved it. you displayed your message incredibly well. great job! |
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Re: She
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by shelby on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 04:53:05 PM AEST
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the content speaks volumes. its sad to sit on the sidelines and watch this happen to those we love and care for
Michelle |
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Re: She
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 07:23:28 PM AEST
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What a nice tribute!! I love this; how heartfelt and honest...
Scorp. |
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Re: She
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 06:21:09 PM AEST
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| Natalie sounds lucky to have you as a friend. I thought this a great write. I liked how it came at me hard and bold. Thanks for sharing. Peace Laura |
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Re: She
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 06:21:42 PM AEST
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| Natalie sounds lucky to have you as a friend. I thought this a great write. I liked how it came at me hard and bold. Thanks for sharing. Peace Laura |
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Re: She
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by Natgr33n on
Thursday, 5th April 2007 @ 04:17:38 AM AEST
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| really well done, i really enjoyed reading this poem! |
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