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The Blind Mans Tears
Contributed by
FigurelessShadow
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Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 04:03:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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He was blind,
He was dying,
He was sad,
He cryed,
Nothing came out,
My life is his tear,
Blank, sad.
Im crying,
Not dying,
Im sad,
In the pain of love,
Im caught in its spell,
That can not be undone.
The blind man cryed,
As he died,
His tears were blank,
His tears were faded,
Blurry, distorted,
My life is his cying,
Now I have a,
Knife in my hands,
And now I'm dying...
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FigurelessShadow
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2005-06-09 16:03:03]
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Re: The Blind Mans Tears
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by MajesticPoet on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 04:06:16 PM AEST
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WOW!!!!!!! This is a great poem.. The feelings and how you where able to use both you and the blind man in this one is awsome. Keep up the great works...
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Re: The Blind Mans Tears
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by xxbreathlessx on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 04:09:12 PM AEST
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i like how you created a conection between the blind man and yourself.
"My life is his tear,
Blank, sad"
good job! |
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Re: The Blind Mans Tears
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by shelby on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 04:54:32 PM AEST
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caught in a spell that cant be undone haunting a terrific write
Michelle |
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Re: The Blind Mans Tears
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 06:25:08 PM AEST
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Great job! Really good expression in this.
Scorp. |
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Re: The Blind Mans Tears
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by In_a_while on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 08:40:55 AM AEST
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| Very, very well expressed piece!! the energy between you and the old man was so entangled and powerful!! My hat goes off to your creativity! dw |
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Re: The Blind Mans Tears
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by nic on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 01:15:18 AM AEST
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| wow... you should be proud of this. you really have a talent for getting a feeling across! |
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