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The rain of tears
Contributed by
SPOOKY
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Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 03:40:00 PM in AEST
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Sometimes it's hard to say I'm sorry,,,
and I know sometimes it's hard to except,,
I realy don't blame you,,if you don't except it,,
But theres alot about me you don't understand,,,
like seeing tears in the rain,,
and seeing saddness in the blackest nights,,
when your able to see those,,,
then maybe then you'll be able to
understand me,,,
or when you walk you ask yourself,,,
Where am I going,,Or why did i say it to him,
The only thing that comes to mind is,,
I'm sorry, I didn't mean to hurt you,,,
A person feels bad enough,,
they'll say anything,,not from the heart,,
It's from hurt he feels inside,,
But when he able to except the hurt,,
he'll know the one thing nobody can take
away from him,,is the love he has,,,
They will never see tears in the rain,,
for they don't care who they hurt,,
But one day they'll feel the sorrow in the
blackest night,,,,
For when it rains it will be there own
TEARS,,,,Then they will know,,,,,,
craig s. meeks
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SPOOKY
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2003-01-04 15:40:00]
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Re: The rain of tears
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by wyrd_faerie on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 03:47:36 PM AEST
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| this is a beautiful poem with a beautiful idea, so sad, well done... |
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Re: The rain of tears
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 03:52:30 PM AEST
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Dearest Spooky @-<<--
Loneliness and the feeling of being unwanted is the most terrible to have to endure... an excellent write, very moving and I love your depth here..
Your friend always Nessa |
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Re: The rain of tears
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 04:59:03 PM AEST
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This was powerful and I enjoyed it alot. I can relate to it I to have often wondered who is crying when its raining. I loved this poem and I could ramble on for hours, but I will spare you.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: The rain of tears
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 06:09:19 PM AEST
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Craig, this is exceptionally beautiful... You have written it with so much feelings.. Keep them coming, my friend...
Jenni |
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Re: The rain of tears
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by OreO on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 07:43:08 PM AEST
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And when it rains who's tears are these, to judge and scorn and punish me, i say im sorry to you each time and you keep hailing on my soul in time, i wish my friend Craig that i could show you just how very deeply your poetry moves my soul....never stop writing....i love every poem of yours i read....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: The rain of tears
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 07:49:18 PM AEST
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| whoa this was very moving i feel that way many times thank you for sharing |
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Re: The rain of tears
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by EmSal on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 09:19:54 PM AEST
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| Hey it rained here today just an hour ago, and I never thought about it like that before. |
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