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Welcome
Contributed by
xxbreathlessx
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Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 03:43:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Welcome to the world of dreams and deadlines,
of nothingness and everything,
the world of contradiction.
Welcome to the world that will leave you so freely begging on the street
or unsafe in your own home.
To the world of love in blinding places,
Of tragedies that pull us closer.
welcome to the world that puts you down in order for it to step up.
Welcome to the world where feelings carry you
and you get lost in the moments it provides.
Welcome to the world of prediction.
Of leaping with eyes wide closed
And hoping.
Welcome to the world of carelessness and lies.
Welcome to the world of millions dead and more alive.
Welcome to the world were the air you breathe is
anything but pure,
Welcome to the hardships of growing up, even when your old.
open your eyes little baby,
and say hello to your new home.
Copyright ©
xxbreathlessx
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2005-06-09 15:43:35]
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Re: Welcome
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by kuro_rei on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 03:57:46 PM AEST
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This was a great write. Thank you for your lovely comments on "Injected". It was very kind of you. I love the lines you wrote,
"Welcome to the world of carelessness and lies.
Welcome to the world of millions dead and more alive.
Welcome to the world were the air you breathe is
anything but pure"
Those lines are everything but lies.
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Re: Welcome
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by shelby on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 04:10:40 PM AEST
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wow wow wow this is tops! details start to finish you laid it all clearly on the line a great write
Michelle |
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Re: Welcome
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by justme03 on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 05:43:29 PM AEST
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this is a good poem. i liekd the imagery and the way it flowed. awesome write and thanx 4 commenting on my poem
~Kortnie~ |
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Re: Welcome
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 06:28:24 PM AEST
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*stands up and claps* Well done indeed!
Scorp. |
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Re: Welcome
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 10:50:03 PM AEST
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this one is brilliant... i love your writing, but this stands out, very true, complete, and smooth. you have my praise!
joshua |
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