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The World Behind The Glass
Contributed by
WorthlesSanity666
on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 03:36:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I breath in life
and then breath out.
Loneliness beside me.
A mirror in front.
I look up into eyes
that are mine.
I caress the face
that is my own.
I see the creature in the glass
but I see no loneliness beside it.
I stare into the "reflection."
Search the world on the other side.
It's different and warm there.
It’s a place you want to be.
I stare until I’m sure
there’s nothing in-between
my reflection’s world
and mine.
I stand in my frigid realm and
I stare into my eyes
and slowly move towards myself.
I reach into the world
and just as I’m about to pass through
I hit the glass.
And I just know
that if I had waited
one more moment,
I wouldn’t be alone.
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WorthlesSanity666
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2005-06-09 15:36:41]
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Re: The World Behind The Glass
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by xxbreathlessx on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 03:53:29 PM AEST
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| well i dont know where the last part is from but i think it adds alot of depth to your poem. its a cool idea. great write. |
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Re: The World Behind The Glass
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 08:35:33 PM AEST
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| I stand in my frigid realm....i love that.....that sets the whole piece for me....you took me there..... |
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