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Unexpected Emotions
Contributed by
o7neves
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Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 03:04:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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There's this emptiness inside
That makes me cry
Despite my damn pride
'Til I'm completely dry
Yearning for your touch
Remembering your scent
Things of the such
Can't believe that I went
Playing over your old voicemail
'Til it's embedded in my head
I can't help but to wail
I'm tired of the tears that I shed
Can't believe how much I care
It was such a surprise
Life's got a way of being unfair
I feel like our hands are tied
But life has a plan
To work things out
You'll do what you can
And I'll try not to pout
So do what you must
You'll always have a place in my heart
Not just for the lust
And of course that's the best part
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o7neves
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2005-06-09 15:04:41]
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Re: Unexpected Emotions
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by kuro_rei on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 03:40:00 PM AEST
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This is a good write.. I liked it a lot. Reminds me of me and my bf.. I liked the line:
"But life has a plan
To work things out
You'll do what you can
And I'll try not to pout"
Brilliant. I enjoyed it.
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Re: Unexpected Emotions
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by CurtisC on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 10:24:49 PM AEST
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yay tanya! this was wonderful dear, i'm glad to see that you're still writing your little heart out over there in NYC, can't say the same for myself, its been awhile since i've written anything....anyway great poem, hope to talk to you soon.
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Re: Unexpected Emotions
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by Pyrofungus on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 02:11:14 AM AEST
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awesome....very well done...
loved these lines
"Can't believe how much I care
It was such a surprise
Life's got a way of being unfair
I feel like our hands are tied" |
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