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Rain against my window (rewritten)
Contributed by
Duncan
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Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 02:59:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
PoemsonBeauty
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Miniature stampede; pressing
Paws relentlessly enquiring.
Encrypted message eternally lost,
Into the heavy spider-web spun.
Silver-veiled painting, mirage-like
And infinitely enigmatic.
Sharp reflection faded,
I embrace a fairytale reality.
Copyright ©
Duncan
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2005-06-09 14:59:06] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Rain against my window (rewritten)
(User Rating: 1 ) by feathercut on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 03:04:23 PM AEST (User
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simply put and so beautifully spoken..... thankyou for sharing a moment with me... please keep writing |
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Re: Rain against my window (rewritten)
(User Rating: 1 ) by xxbreathlessx on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 03:56:19 PM AEST (User
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Brilliant. Beautiful. You make this moment come alive for the reader and make somthing as simple as rain the most spectacular view in the world. Magnificent job! |
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