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Believe
Contributed by
feathercut
on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 02:11:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The carraige awaited
our bodies divided
you stepped out
just as you had stepped in
My Love was abandoned
and your love,
he waited
The day rose
and the stars faded
yes we used to dance across shores
there is no more,
no more than a second,
no more than a stillness,
in an ocean of movement,
Be sure.
A gentle awakening
eye lashes rise
eyes greet in understanding
And it is the biggest lie your soul could
ever keep
because in the truth,
there is never,
Belief
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feathercut
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2005-06-09 14:11:32]
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Re: Believe
(User Rating: 1 )
by Vermillion on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 06:10:44 PM AEST
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an outstanding write. excellently worded and deeply moving.bravo!
~Vermillion~ |
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Re: Believe
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by dinosauruscharlee on
Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 06:13:00 AM AEST
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magnificent.
its not following sterotypical poem stance, and that makes it even more flowing.
i liked it.
:]
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