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I Hate You
Contributed by
brokenbutterfly
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Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 02:05:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I hate you
I hate us
I hate what we had
I’ll never have that again
I hate how we were
‘cause I miss you
I hate not having you
When I need it most
I hate how we had to end
Nothing can fix it
I hate that I can never again
Count on you to be there
I hate knowing that
It could have been different
I hate seeing you,
Seeing you every single day
I hate looking in your eyes
And seeing you look away
I hate how you pretend
That you don’t even know me
I hate feeling sad and lonely
Because I don’t have you
But most of all I hate loving you
Knowing you don’t love me back
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brokenbutterfly
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2005-06-09 14:05:40]
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Re: I Hate You
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by jyssvw22 on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 02:23:11 PM AEST
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this was a good write
brought back alopt of old feelings when i felt the same way about soemone..give it time..instead of hating him..love yourself. |
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Re: I Hate You
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by Pisces101 on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 03:44:34 PM AEST
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Raw emotion dear. Your in touch with your feelings. this will all subside. live and let live.
sarah |
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Re: I Hate You
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 04:27:20 PM AEST
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| I like this poem, your emotions really came acrossed, they crawled and quivered deep into my heart, heh, I have been through this before, it is actually the way I feel right now. SLipSiX. |
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Re: I Hate You
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by brittaney on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 06:02:45 PM AEST
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I feel this way so much! Good write!
Brittaney~ |
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Re: I Hate You
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 06:31:27 PM AEST
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Wow. Well done! You really captured the emotions of heartache....Good job.
Scorp. |
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Re: I Hate You
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by Dorkfish on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 11:59:28 AM AEST
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| Wow, that was a good poem. You are a good writer and you will only get better with age. For being so young, you have talent. I just hope you know that you are young and I was there at 15 too, it will pass. You will find someone. I'm sorry for your heartache. Keep up the good work! |
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Re: I Hate You
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 01:58:44 PM AEST
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I think there is too much hate in this one. The word hate is in half of the lines. That is too distracting. Try to explain the hate you feel through ways other than saying it directly...
Jodi |
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