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a night in fear
Contributed by
nightwolf
on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 12:37:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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the woods were dark that night
darker than theye have ever been
i looked down at my watch
it was getting close to ten
the air smelled of pine
a thick fog covered the ground
so quickly i was lost
with no hope of being found
the wind was blowing softly
and the moon was full and bright
and clearely i could see a person
in the dim night time light
my palms were sweating
my stomach was turning
my heart was beating wildly
my blood was churning
i closed my eyes
and it didnt take long
to open them again and the creature was gone
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2005-06-09 12:37:35]
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Re: a night in fear
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by Kitty06 on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 08:39:20 PM AEST
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| I like this poem, it really evokes emotions and the senses. My favorite line was 'the air smelled of pine.' Great job, keep on writing! |
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Re: a night in fear
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 01:48:07 PM AEST
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When I read this I almost felt like I was the person in the poem... great write...
Jodi |
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