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Take
Contributed by
Pisces101
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Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 12:05:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Take your love,
your words of hate.
Take your designer shirts
And everything you never gave
Take your envy
And everything you wanted within
Take your lying breath
Take you beautiful skin
Your questions, and answers
Take them all too.
Take them with everything
that you say I make you do.
Take your *****in excuses
along with you boyish ways
Take your accusations
Take these past fews days
Take all this *****
and give it to anyone but me.
I don't want it anymore
Take it all and leave.
Copyright ©
Pisces101
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2005-06-09 12:05:19]
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Re: Take
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 06:18:57 PM AEST
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Haha....Nice! I like it; especially the ending.
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Re: Take
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by Dorkfish on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 04:31:19 PM AEST
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| Pretty Good! |
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