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she said
Contributed by
In_a_While
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Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 11:51:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
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she took me away
and said "i am here"
i said you can't stay
you're all that i fear
she took me today
and said "yes i feel"
i said you can't stay
your time i won't steal
she shook me again
and said "let's go tomorrow"
i said you're my friend
but my best friend is sorrow
she walked through a storm
and said "let's just go on"
i said no silence no more
i want you till dawn..
so i can tell you... that i love you my girl.
dw
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Re: she said
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by sride686 on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 06:25:57 AM AEST
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| I just want to know how you can get no comments on this write it was very good. It has a very different style but its not often you see perfection in a style such as this. But one question I have for you is this true did you find a girl you can be with and maybe love. If so I’m happy for you and hope all goes well. You’re a nice guy and a great writer and I hope this is someone you can share that with. Take care my friend and keep up the good writes….Steve |
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Re: she said
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by KarlaMarie on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 05:37:28 AM AEST
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I thought this was a lovely poem, and i quite enjoyed it. it was sweet and i am glad you found a girl who did break the shell...
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