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Who if not You?
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 03:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Who's gonna write me the sweetest letters
in the morning and make me feel better?
Who if not You?
Who's going to want me in their life tomorrow?
Who's gonna turn to joys my sorrows?
Who if not You?
Who's gonna love black clothes like me if not you?
Who's gonna make me feel brand new?
Who if not You?
Who am I going to give little reminders to, if not you?
...and who'll touch me, the tenderest of all, if not you?
Who's gonna see beauty in my searing tears if not you?
Who's gonna love me years from now, who if not you?
Who's going to be my writing's inspiration if not you?
Who's gonna make me smile when it is raining on my life;
if not you?
Who's going to make me fall out of my chair
laughing
and feel my darkness and yet make my heart sing?
Who's gonna turn that spark into flames, if not you?
Who's gonna love me the sweetest of all if not you?
I believe I believe
Who will be the music in my soul?
You have filled my heart.
Who if not You?
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ladyfawn
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2003-01-04 15:00:00]
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Re: Who if not You?
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by spooky on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 04:06:38 PM AEST
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| you willm find the one,,have faith,,beautifully written,,,spooky |
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Re: Who if not You?
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 05:35:49 PM AEST
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I usually dont like love poems, but I liked this one a lot. Although I am a lot younger than you (I think) I have asked the same questions. There is only one line I didn't get 'Who's gonna love black clothes like me if not you?' that line sort of confused me do u like black clothes? This was beautiful... keep em up
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Who if not You?
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 06:15:59 PM AEST
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Nessa, this was lovely....
Jenni |
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Re: Who if not You?
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by Panther_1978 on
Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 02:36:10 AM AEST
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Well, it was me... remember! I did everything for you, I mean, I would have even died for you but O' well... But I good write anyhow
Panther |
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Re: Who if not You?
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 11:41:16 AM AEST
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| nope panther mike this isnt for you lol |
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Re: Who if not You?
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 12:17:49 PM AEST
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Parthian Arrow is you
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Re: Who if not You?
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 01:16:49 PM AEST
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| very touching i enjoyed it very much |
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Re: Who if not You?
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by wolfflow on
Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 04:02:53 PM AEST
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| wrap my soul around you and hold you in my heart |
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Re: Who if not You?
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by Arwen on
Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 11:41:37 AM AEST
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| god...this poem is absolutely beautiful!!! I'm a total 'love' cynic and i don't bother reading anything mushy but this wasn't one of those soppy arghkkkkk ones :)) t'was luvleeeee, almost makes me want to feel that way too. Have yet to find someone who can make me fall off my chair laughing tho' *lol*!! keep them coming :)) |
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Re: Who if not You?
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by Searcher on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 08:51:11 AM AEST
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Most of us ask the same questions, but you say it with such flare
Good write
Searcher |
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Re: Who if not You?
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by Cynthia on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 05:07:13 AM AEST
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| Nessa, this poem is absolutely beautiful. This totally touched my heart. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Who if not You?
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 19th December 2014 @ 10:28:19 AM AEST
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Ooh, I love it and relate so well. Nice write!
P.s my collection of black clothing is pretty impressive. ;)
~Scorp |
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