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Mom
Contributed by
dorkfish
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Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 11:08:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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She left so young, so sweet, so loved.
She fought her battle, but could not win.
She never complained or felt cheated.
We could see the pain in her eyes, but she was always brave.
The time had come, we knew it was true.
We stood by her side and said our goodbyes.
Sometimes things happen that we cannot control.
She loved us very much, we were very grateful.
She is my hero and I love her dearly.
I know she up there and she sees us all.
I bet she's proud, I bet she's grateful.
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Re: Mom
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by rainbow_leo on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 11:56:09 AM AEST
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| This is a beautiful poem. I am so very sorry for your loss. Keep writing! |
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Re: Mom
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by boobiepeach on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 12:20:42 PM AEST
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beautiful yam
keep up the writing its a good outlet! |
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Re: Mom
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 12:36:53 PM AEST
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| So young to lose your mother. You have my deepest sympathy. Writing is an excellent outlet for grief and pain (heck just read some of mine) lil' lol But keep writing, as we get older, the pain gets harder to bear, and writing and connecting with fellow poets of anguish is a great remedy to darkened days. My prayers go out to you. Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: Mom
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by bernard on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 12:47:04 PM AEST
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| The Y.P.D.C is a good place to help you lose some of the grief. Writing helps in a number of ways. Many will read your poems. Some will comment.For you personally it is a great valve to let off steam Welcome aboard and keep on writing.from bernard. |
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Re: Mom
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 07:27:47 PM AEST
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Oh wow---this is truly touching. What a lovely write from the heart...I'm so sorry for your loss, I'm glad to see you're keeping her very much alive in the most important place....Your heart....Well done.
Scorp. |
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