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Never
Contributed by
Djarven
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Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 09:11:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Never say I like you, if you really don’t care
Never talk about feelings, if they really aren’t there
Never ask for my number, if you don’t gonna call
Never give me yours, if you won’t answer at all
Never hold my hand, if you gonna break my heart
Never say your going to, if you don’t plan to start
Never look into my eyes, if all you do is lie
Never say hello, if you really mean goodbye
Never say this was meant to be, if you don’t wanna try
Never say forever, cause forever makes me cry
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Djarven
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2005-06-09 09:11:28]
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Re: Never
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 09:55:00 AM AEST
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| I can relate to this poem at this time. A few typographical errors, but the sentiment came roaring through. I understand the anguish of this write and it touched me. Pulled on my heartstrings!Very well done!!! Angel always godspeed...joni |
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Re: Never
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 11:02:51 AM AEST
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few grammar errors, but your only human. i have definitely been there...it hurts, and it just sucks. they always seem to lie right? even when you think 'this ones different' he lies like all the rest.
even though, never say never. in this case though, i think it's justified
- Beth - |
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Re: Never
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st January 2006 @ 06:42:45 PM AEST
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| Wow! thats all i have to say! great poem..i would love to see you keep writing. |
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