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Ramblings of My Mind
Contributed by
withpen_inhand
on
Tuesday, 23rd July 2002 @ 06:08:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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To much to soon
To little to late
Things moving fast
Have to wait
I'm on My way
Cant get there from here
I'm scared of the dark
I have no Fear
Up is down
Down is up
You're a fathful dog
You're a lying pup
You give your all
You have nothing to give
You're going home
You have no place to live
You cant run your life
Dont run mine
You're a wonderful person
You're so un-kind
Your so sweet
You leave a bitter taste in my mouth
If I'm going north
Why am I walking south
So many things
Going through My mind
Lets sit down and talk
I dont have the time
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withpen_inhand
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2002-07-23 06:08:12]
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Re: Ramblings of My Mind
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by lil_hummingbird on
Tuesday, 23rd July 2002 @ 06:12:31 AM AEST
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| heyyyyyyyy your mind rambles like mine! good write |
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Re: Ramblings of My Mind
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by chatabox on
Tuesday, 23rd July 2002 @ 06:31:59 AM AEST
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its all topsey turvey isnt it, just like my mind too.
lovely write though. |
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Re: Ramblings of My Mind
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by humphdj on
Tuesday, 23rd July 2002 @ 07:01:00 AM AEST
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Great write..........loved it!
Rgds
Dave |
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Re: Ramblings of My Mind
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by Chrissie on
Wednesday, 24th July 2002 @ 05:08:30 PM AEST
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Excellent..I loved this too..
Chrissie |
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Re: Ramblings of My Mind
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 24th July 2002 @ 08:30:58 PM AEST
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Good write, with pen in hand..lol
Jenni |
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