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THIS IS MY SOUL
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 04:09:15 AM in AEST
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THIS IS MY SOUL I LEAVE IT TO YOU
TO STEP AND TO SPIT AND TO CAST IT WHEN YOU'RE THROUGH
IT'S BEEN THAT WAY SINCE BEFORE I FORGOT
HOW INNOCENCE WAS AND A WORLD THAT WAS NOT BOUGHT
THIS IS MY SOUL I LEAVE IT TO YOU
TO DO WHAT YOU WANT AND TO LOVE IT WHEN YOU'RE THROUGH
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2005-06-09 04:09:15]
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Re: THIS IS MY SOUL
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by Sinned on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 06:28:55 AM AEST
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Lostrelic
You needen't shout--"all capital letters"
Who are you giving your soul to ?
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Re: THIS IS MY SOUL
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by FigurelessShadow on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 07:21:49 AM AEST
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Not bad, too short though but otherwise ya, good job. * whats with caps?*
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Re: THIS IS MY SOUL
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by emystar on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 06:31:31 AM AEST
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I wonder why people can't recognize good poetry. I get so agrivated when I read the comments to u. It seems they do nothing but critasize your work. I'm suprized u haven't given up on this site and told most of um to go to hell. Sorry to be so blunt but i know u understand what I'm saying.
Keep writing 'cause your spelling or all caps don't faze me none. It's the writing that moves me not the eticut that most seem to sing for.
huggs,
your friend,
emy
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