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my dreams of black
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 03:55:30 AM in AEST
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IT LETS ME SEE THE VISION WITHIN
I WILL SHARE IT NOW ITS PRESENCE QUIET GRIM
EVERY ONES SOUL WAS SCREAMING AND OUR LAND WAS BEING SOLD
BLACK TEARS ROLLED DOWN MY FACE TO HEAVY TO HOLD
I TRIED TO RUN WITH THE WEIGHT ON MY BACK
BUT THE FUTHER IS SET TIME ISNT A COMPUTER YOU CAN HACK
A BOX RULED OUR LIVES AND WE WORSHIPPED THE RICH
WHILE A SLIME COVERIED OUR EYES WE WERE BLIND AS A *****
WE KILLED IN GODS NAME AND WALLOWED IN SIN
WHILE OUR LEADERS GOT RICH LYING WITHIN
BUT THE SOALS WENT ALL QUIET THE WEIGHT HAD JUST LEFT
BUT THE LAND WAS STILL TAKEN WE GAVE IN TO THE THIEFT
THE END OF THE WORLD IS ALL WE HAVE LEFT
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2005-06-09 03:55:30]
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Re: my dreams of black
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by speed-of-sound on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 04:21:54 AM AEST
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| very sad... might need to check the spelling, not that it matters really. |
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Re: my dreams of black
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 05:42:40 AM AEST
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| WOAH! anger comes through well. |
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Re: my dreams of black
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by Sinned on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 07:01:35 AM AEST
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lostrelic
Not a bad poem
Your anger hits home
I voted you a four
Nohing less nothing more
There will be rumors
Tremmors
Cries of peace
Seasons cease
Then the end
He comes again
Sinned.....Don't SHOUT |
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Re: my dreams of black
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by FigurelessShadow on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 07:27:02 AM AEST
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| ok, U'r angry arent u. lol. Well. whats with the caps? good tho |
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