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rejected
Contributed by
paul_x_walker
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Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 03:44:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I feel rejected
I feel forgotten
I don't know why this happened
I guess I'm rotten
But it happens all the time
When suddenly you decide
I can't hold back
What I feel inside
Don't say maybe
Or call me baby
because i'm not crazy
I dont need the glitter
Dont believe the type
You might say im the simple type
Hey you can you hear me
I want you to come near me
All the faces you're making
Save it for the scene
All the people you're faking
Why was it only me
I got scars on my heart and they won't go away
Looking for someone to take them from me
Everybody knows I'm a little insane
but that makes no difference
Why don't you play the game
I'm as bad it can get
And good as it can be
you think i'm I'm pitiful
i feel miserable
The worst things you can come across
They might cause you to suffer loss
now your desperate and want me back
but its to late now that were separate
in ain't coming back
now its your turn to feel the pain
as i walked away you sat there in the rain
soaking wet and in pain.....
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paul_x_walker
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2005-06-09 03:44:29]
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Re: rejected
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by speed-of-sound on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 04:44:30 AM AEST
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so sad. i love the image the ending creates, although very sad. nice write...
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Re: rejected
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by FigurelessShadow on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 07:32:49 AM AEST
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| it's good, well described Nice job |
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Re: rejected
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by Fears on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 09:52:13 AM AEST
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I realy liked this and I dont understand why you think that the ending suxx.. Like, it created suck image and casted so much emotion. Keep on writing!
( Im only a PM away, just so u know ) |
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Re: rejected
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 11:39:07 PM AEST
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wow honey you did really well on this one.
love mom |
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