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not closing the door
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 03:10:28 AM in AEST
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i have found a door that was locked away in my soal
it was in the place i thought was a black hole
there was something inside you something so free
that awoke these feelings your heart was the key
but the love i had found had only one side
me loving you my feelings i must hide
so im closing this door and replacing the key
so mabey my next love will love me
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2005-06-09 03:10:28]
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Re: not closing the door
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by speed-of-sound on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 04:12:50 AM AEST
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a nice write. i love the ending. keep it up...
hannah :) |
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Re: not closing the door
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by FallenAngels on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 01:37:48 PM AEST
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| Your words are beautiful..and so are you. |
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Re: not closing the door
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by karoody on
Friday, 17th October 2008 @ 04:14:19 AM AEST
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wow, written in such a different style than the other stuff i have read from you. now i am curious if it is the subject or the factor of the years in between the writes. perhaps both? i loved this one either way. so much eloquence and wisdom.
love and smiles
kara |
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