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WHAT GOD MAKES GOD TAKES
Contributed by
Bruce
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Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 11:54:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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WHAT GOD MAKES GOD TAKES
WHAT GOD MAKES GOD TAKES
you never have any idea,when it's your time to go
Whether you lived in the fast lane
or just took it a little slow
So live and let live
enjoy each day of your life
Be either a loving husband
or a loving wife
Give what you get
and always try to give more
A true and strong love
faithful and very pure
To the one that you love
and always need by your side
Don't ever attempt
in anyway to hide
Just how you feel
in every possible way
By what you do
and with the words, that you say
I love you my darling
is a very good way to start
These words of true love
coming straight from you heart
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2005-06-08 23:54:49]
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Re: WHAT GOD MAKES GOD TAKES
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by Stellar on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 12:27:40 AM AEST
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Something everyone should think about and take to heart.
Great poem!
**Stellar |
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Re: WHAT GOD MAKES GOD TAKES
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 05:43:41 AM AEST
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Great advice, my friend.....
Jenni |
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Re: WHAT GOD MAKES GOD TAKES
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by TN_Angel67 on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 08:39:03 AM AEST
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| Great poem |
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Re: WHAT GOD MAKES GOD TAKES
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 01:46:59 PM AEST
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Excellent advice, Bruce.
Rita |
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Re: WHAT GOD MAKES GOD TAKES
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by inoc on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 12:34:30 AM AEST
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A honest poem....that makes you think...
thanks Bruce a great write.
Yes...We are living in this world and sometimes forgetting we need to be loving also.
cheers Coni~ |
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Re: WHAT GOD MAKES GOD TAKES
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 02:30:08 AM AEST
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***** you never have any idea, when it's your time to go
Very effective first line. That sentence is full of step by step process beginning to take place and the rest of the write proves to support the opening line.
It's a catch line that begins to build a story lesson. Gets one to think deep about life.. Almost can give the feeling that we are gone before we even get started. Are we going before we even get started.
Or, even the idea of passing along the information to start to living life to it's fullest , so that when we do go, we won't have any regrets that we did not try to do the most we could do, the best we could do.
****Give what you get
and always try to give more
More effective dialogue that deepens the process
of life's experience. Building layers and layers of life in action.
***** is a very good way to start
An ending to the beginning of a day.. starting at the end of a start.
Your writing ideas and style always gives out lessons to be learned.. Full of thought.. Full of life that unfolds and throws reality back at us for another full catch.. the words.. Nets of gold
Thank you for this write..
RLPoetress ; ))
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